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Re: deleted
Very intresting and revealing on life. Its always been a good question to ponder about whether or not the people in asylums are the insane ones. But then again, this ...
Jun 14, 2011 -
Re: Random
Oh yes, a poem about writers block; the best! Despite claiming to have no imagery you have tons of it: drumming these keys hammering my brain Also its only a ...
Jun 14, 2011 -
Re: To Wander Without Walking
Makes you think about how much times have changed and sort of a coming-of-age story. The flowers can symbolize the happy memories, as flowers are respectably happy plants. The basment ...
Jun 14, 2011 -
Re: Buzzy
Its a very big transition and adds the shock effect at the stanza that states right out into the open, Until he died. . It makes the poem more intresting ...
Jun 13, 2011 -
Re: The Psychologist
Epic psychological thriller-ish story! The only grammatical error I immediately noticed was in the second paragraph at left to him.Before . This should be changed to left to him. Before ...
Jun 13, 2011 -
Re: The night is always darkest before the dawn
The way hope is portrayed in the fourth stanza, "Hope is dripping out of out minds, like solemn rain drops after a storm." is really descriptive of how as time ...
Jun 13, 2011 -
Re: Mashed Taters
Amazing voice and dialect! Coming from a fellow mashed potato lover this is some great work. The end is extremely humorous, "The horrible truth, hidden in yer mushy love. The ...
Jun 13, 2011
