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thanks a lot LastPaladin your comment far surpassed a like. the thing with the like is that i don't truly know what the reader felt, and your comment made me ...

Thanks Jash, change is going to be made as u suggested. don't forget to hit the like button :)

Thanks much :) I've made that change. did not see it till u mentioned it.

No I would not be changing anything, well maybe just the part where u say I could use will instead of would... This is not a love poem, its simple ...

hey thanks for going thought me essay and giving all those helpful tips. I don't normally write essays but I did this for an English class and decided to post ...

Thanks medievalwriter your comments is appreciated and I would take into consideration what you suggested. looking forward to a even more brilliant piece of writing :)

awe! very touching i love it.

wow... Very depressing. Why would someone write this about themselves, for the love of me I can't understand. put a little rhyming in this and you would have a perfect ...

thanks :)

thanks much I really do appreciate you comment... it made me feel that i had done justice to the seasons; coming from someone who have only experienced only two season ...

Thanks for the comment it was greatly appreciated. The three stanza was written at three different time period, hence giving them a unique style. It wasn't a plan to switch ...

* I miss the way you made me smile, the way i felt perfectly in your arms i liked that you could have made me cry yet i loved you ...

thanks :D

Life in the sense of being able to restart may not be a Nintendo game but in the sense that there are so many different types of games out there ...

ok cool, i wasn't saying that you have to do that in your poem, its just a tip that would make it more English. :) thanks for your feedback thou ...