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Azila

  • Novel / Chapter » General, General Re: Being Beautiful Hurts

    Hi! First off, I'm going to agree with Snoink that the color here is a little bit distracting. People expect to see black (or at least dark) lettering, so if ...

    Apr 28, 2011
  • Short Story » Science Fiction, General Re: The Last Human on Planet Earth

    Hi! Thanks for the request. I'm going to have to make this review brief, but let me know if you want me to elaborate on anything. Firstly, I like the ...

    Apr 27, 2011
  • Short Story » Fantasy, General Re: Stains of Red

    Alright, then. Here I am. I actually am going to do a few nit-pickish things this time--think what you will. Three people burned to their death today, and nobody even ...

    Apr 27, 2011
  • Short Story » Romantic, General Re: The Coward's Way Out

    Heya. Are you enjoying your vacation (or, as you'd say, holiday)? I finally got around to reviewing this! Just a warning, though: I've been busy lately and haven't been reviewing ...

    Apr 24, 2011
  • Short Story » General, General Re: Life from a BriStish point of view

    Dudette, you amazing little [insert BriStish term of affection]! This is [insert BriStish adverb meaning "extremely"] [insert BriStish adjective meaning "amazing]! Here's a list of the words in this p

    Apr 23, 2011
  • Novel / Chapter » Fanfiction, General Re: Deleted 93

    Oh jeez. xD You don't even have to do it. I wasn't really being serious. But if you want to, feel free. 8D Lumpy, dear, this is Zila you're talking ...

    Apr 21, 2011
  • Novel / Chapter » General, General Re: Call Me Mr. Ailuro~(1.1)

    Shrubbery! I have finally arrived and I am going to do my best to give a good review. Just a warning, before I get started: it's almost 3:00am in my ...

    Apr 19, 2011
  • Short Story » Fantasy, General Re: Ash

    Hullo, 'tis me. First off, nit-picks. I won't go overboard with them, but there are a few things I'd like to point out. Not stylistic things--I'm pretty sure that this ...

    Apr 18, 2011
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: Story Eight- The Pain I

    Hi! Sorry I'm so despicably late getting to this. Please find it in your heart to forgive me, eh? First off, I love the concept. The whole idea with the ...

    Apr 17, 2011
  • Short Story » Romantic, General Re: All that glitters is not gold

    Hi! Thanks for the request. I've only got a few minutes, but I'll try and be as helpful as possible. First off, I'm just going to point out the few ...

    Apr 16, 2011
  • Novel / Chapter » General, General Re: Stop and Stare (Part 9)

    Hey. You thought I wouldn't review this, didn't you? Well I'm back because I love fight scenes have oodles of time don't have anything better I should be doing right ...

    Apr 16, 2011
  • Short Story » General, General Re: Jackie Dear

    Hi! Thanks for the request (and thanks to Tanya for recommencing me!). I'm not going to do any grammatical nit-picky stuff, because you seem to be pretty strong in that ...

    Apr 14, 2011
  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: All's My Fault

    Hi, Ninety-two! I don't usually review poetry, so pardon me if I'm completely useless here... but I'm working on it! I will try and be as helpful as possible. Also, ...

    Apr 14, 2011
  • Short Story » Science Fiction, General Re: The Effect

    Hi! Sorry I've taken so long getting this to you. Things have been rather hectic for me of late. I'm not sure how much help I'll be after all the ...

    Apr 12, 2011
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Once my only love but now, my passionate hate.

    Hi Kagi. Thanks for the request. I'm not sure I can really review this, for two reasons. The first is that I'm not a poet, and I'm pretty hopeless when ...

    Apr 12, 2011


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