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Re: A New World: Chapter 3
Wow! This is the first time I've ever gotten such reactions out of readers! It means a lot to me, guys! Thanks! And you don't have to wait too long. ...
Jun 15, 2008 -
Re: A New World: Chapter 1
Thank you, everyone! Cory, I'll see what I can do to fix the "loss of interest" in the second half. Thanks for pointing that out. Mike, I see what you ...
May 30, 2008 -
Re: A New World: Chapter 1
Thank you, everyone, for the posts! I will take heed of your comments and try to fix what's wrong!
May 30, 2008 -
Re: The Dragon Knight Legacy Chapter 3 (Remake)
Once again, a very well written story! But also, there are still those parallelism errors and the red italics. I think just plain italics would work fine. Love it!
Apr 12, 2008 -
Re: Red Rain Prologue
Hmm...well, this prologue has done its job. You've gotten my attention! Not too bad! Wonderful grammar, nice transitions, and a good bit of supsense. I'm definately reading the rest of ...
Feb 19, 2008 -
Re: The Movie for Twilight by Stephenie Meyer
Ummm...okay, that was entirely stupid! Yeah, it's supposed to be humorous, but omg!! This is effin retarded! (*takes heart out of me* Ah, Stephanie! I'm sorry all of this happened!)
Jan 28, 2008 -
Re: Chapter 1: Part One
Whoa, this is the old one! Dang! It's so much different! You're new one is a lot better, definately. You need to post it!!!
Jan 12, 2008 -
Re: Chapter 1
...I knew it...this sucks...BAD BOY, NINJA!!! RYU'S SO MARY SUE!!!!
Aug 28, 2007 -
Re: Chapter 6 - Mission (Part 4)
Okay, people, I'm sorry to do this to you... But I'm starting over. I am completely redoing the whole story; just by reading it and the responses I have gotten, ...
Aug 18, 2007 -
Re: Pokemon Sinnoh Region (Squallz version) Prologue:Eve of Dawn
Wonderful job, Squallz!! I may not have seen the first episode of any of the series, but I DO have to say, you write Poke'mon so much better! Wonderful job! ...
Jul 14, 2007 -
Re: Chasing Rainbows Chapter 19
Wow...that's a lot! Aw, it's so sweet! They're in love! JACOD SHOULD DIE!!! XD He's so evil, I hope that rope breaks! Sorry... It's good! I hope they find each ...
Jul 10, 2007 -
Re: Chasing Rainbows Chapter 17
Lmao! It's so funny when they start kissing and making out!!! Their reactions are the best! When they finally get control, they're shouting and...Gah! It's funny! A couple of comma ...
Jul 9, 2007 -
Re: Chasing Rainbows Chapter 16
A couple of spelling and wording errors, but not too major. Wonderful job! You left me hanging! I hate that! :p
Jul 9, 2007 -
Re: Chapter 6 - Mission (Part 1)
[quote="PsychicNinja"]You need to PM when you post this!! I almost missed it!! :D :D :D :D Well, I really like this latest part! (And it's short :D ) I have ...
Jul 8, 2007 -
Re: A New Fanfiction: Final Fantasy 8 (Chapter 2)
A few spelling errors, but that's pretty much it. Bravo!
Jun 21, 2007