AyumiGosu17

Thanks. It's a really cool program; you should google it - Army JROTC. There must be a million different websites on it, with pictures and schools and such.

Thanks for the critique. I do realize my writing was a bit choppy and repetitive, but I'm currently experiencing a roller coaster of emotions, all due to JROTC, ironically... :? ...

I was thinking the same thing! I'm going to finish this one and then try to find another story. I'm thinking about Cain and Abel as my next project...what do ...

Thank you, everyone. I appreciate all the comments and consolations; they really mean a lot to me. I'm fairly over it now, but you know I'll never fully recover; I'll ...

Wow, so many replies so soon! Thanks a lot, guys! Aussie, I understand what you mean. Rereading, I guess I should put more detail into the surroundings and the culture. ...

Thank you. It's just so hard, as you know, that you have to find some way to vent. I guess poems are my way... At least she's in a better ...

Aww...this is so sweet! I like this! But a pointer: "Week" in line 9 should be "weak". Other than that, VERY nice! :D

:lol: You're welcome. :lol:

Well, other than that, I liked it very much. Straight to the point, no digressing with wordiness necessary. :lol: :wink: Way to go. Keep writing.

Thanks, everyone!

Thank you so much for the reviews! And to answer your question, vox nihili, no, I did not get my inspiration from Emily Dickens' poem; I didn't even know there ...

Thanks a bunch, everyone! And to answer your question Teague, yes, the apostrophes are substituting for accents, because I couldn't figure out how to type the accented letters themselves. And ...

Wow. I've never gotten such a response from so many people before! It feels GREAT!! :smt003 Thanks a bunch, everyone!

Thank you for all the comments! [quote=springrain2693] Wow! This is one of the most interesting essays I've read in a long time! And this is true? Wow, that must've been ...

Wow. You guys got bored! Totally hilarious, though!