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  • Other » Other, General Re: Imagine

    It was interesting but I do believe you over used the word "Imagine"

    Jun 5, 2014
  • Short Story » Realistic, Humor Re: Inspiration Gone

    That happens often and that absolutely sucks. This was a hilarious showing of what can and sometimes does happen when writers are at the brink of something great.

    Jun 5, 2014
  • Poetry » Realistic, Literature Re: Sunsets

    Way to put life into perspective and give the sun more meaning. You pointed out the majesty of God and the beauty of a sunset very smoothly. As a christian ...

    Jun 5, 2014
  • Short Story » Fanfiction, General Re: Frozen Fan-Fiction

    I like it, Frozen is a really good movie but I do appreciate you letting Elsa open the door for Anna

    Jun 5, 2014
  • Poetry » Narrative, Realistic Re: After the weekend:

    Was it an animal?

    Jun 5, 2014
  • Poetry » Humor, Other Re: Magic Trick For Frank.

    Nice. It must be really hard to write without any E's

    Jun 5, 2014
  • Poetry » Lyrical, Realistic Re: Cut Me Down

    That is how most people feel especially when they have a lot to say and are always surrounded by people who have nothing to say and are always talking. Those ...

    Jun 5, 2014
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: Psalm 23 . . . my meditation on it

    Psalms is overall an amazing book in the bible and 23 is one of its best chapters...I truly enjoy your meditation on the chapter. It was well thought out and ...

    Jun 5, 2014
  • Other » Realistic, Humor Re: Happy birthday

    May 5, 2014
  • Poetry » General, General Re: All for one

    Thank you for the review. It was one of my first poems. I did change a few things and I would like it if you looked at it. Once again ...

    Apr 11, 2014
  • Poetry » General, General Re: All for one

    Thank you for the review. It was one of my first poems. I did change a few things and I would like it if you looked at it. Once again ...

    Apr 11, 2014
  • Poetry » Culture, Lyrical Re: The princess with cancer.

    where did you get the inspiration?

    Apr 9, 2014
  • Poetry » Culture, Lyrical Re: The princess with cancer.

    I like the alternate universe....poor Rapunzel

    Apr 9, 2014
  • Poetry » Realistic, Culture Re: Save A Life

    I like it...suck it up.. very nice

    Apr 9, 2014


It had a perfectly round door like a porthole, painted green, with a shiny yellow brass knob in the exact middle. The door opened on to a tube-shaped hall like a tunnel: a very comfortable tunnel without smoke, with panelled walls, and floors tiled and carpeted, provided with polished chairs, and lots and lots of pegs for hats and coats—the hobbit was fond of visitors. The tunnel wound on and on, going fairly but not quite straight into the side of the hill —The Hill, as all the people for many miles round called it—and many little round doors opened out of it, first on one side and then on another.
— JRR Tolkien