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  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Supernatural Re: Pyran (1)

    Thank you for the feedback. So her being at her house is basically a flashback, sorry if that wasn't very clear. Also, in my head I would imaged the burst ...

    Nov 8, 2020
  • Poetry » Realistic, Teen Fiction Re: Goodbye

    Thank you for your review ^-^ I'm glad you enjoyed

    Nov 8, 2020
  • Poetry » Romantic, Realistic Re: Today

    Thank you for your review and your advice

    Nov 8, 2020
  • Poetry » Romantic, Realistic Re: If Only

    Thanks for the review (and your other one) and I really appreciate your feedback. (I wouldn't exactly describe this poem as fun, but I'm glad you enjoyed reading it ^-^)

    Nov 7, 2020
  • Poetry » Romantic, Realistic Re: Today

    Hey, I'm really sorry about what you're going through, I wish you and your fiance the best of luck. I'm really glad that you liked my poem and it feels ...

    Nov 7, 2020
  • Poetry » Humor, Other Re: i found my true love in a youtube ad

    Ngl, SAME! Grammarly is amazing

    Nov 7, 2020
  • Poetry » Realistic, Teen Fiction Re: Goodbye

    Thank you so much, I'm glad you liked it. Best of luck with your friend

    Nov 7, 2020
  • Poetry » Romantic, Realistic Re: If Only

    Thank you for your feedback! I'm glad you liked it ^-^

    Nov 7, 2020
  • Poetry » Romantic, Realistic Re: If Only

    Thank you so much for your feedback! ^-^

    Nov 6, 2020
  • Poetry » Realistic, Teen Fiction Re: Goodbye

    Thanks so much, I'm glad you liked it and yeah, I've had that exact thing happen. It's also so strange when you do talk to them after years and it ...

    Nov 6, 2020
  • Poetry » Realistic, Teen Fiction Re: Goodbye

    Thank you so much for your feedback! I'm glad you liked it

    Nov 6, 2020
  • Poetry » Romantic, Realistic Re: If Only

    I fixed the formatting and made a few edits, thanks again for your help

    Nov 6, 2020
  • Poetry » Realistic, Teen Fiction Re: Goodbye

    Thank you so much! Most of this poem was based on a friend I had throughout elementary school, but when I changed schools we tried to keep in touch, but ...

    Nov 6, 2020
  • Poetry » General, General Re: I'm In Love With Who You Failed To Be

    Np, you did an amazing job on this ^-^

    Nov 6, 2020
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Another Candle & Another Year

    Np, you did a great job ^-^

    Nov 6, 2020


The fellow who thinks he knows it all is especially annoying to those of us who do.
— Harold Coffin