User avatar

Avis

Avis

  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Shattered Like Me

    Wow, this is amazing. I really loved the aggressive nature of this poem and it did an amazing job of conveying anger and hatred and the immense desire for vengeance. ...

    Nov 7, 2020
  • Poetry » Romantic, General Re: love me like i love the moon

    I really liked this collection of poems and the way they are all little stories that fit together into a larger narrative. I really think the eight poems for eight ...

    Nov 6, 2020
  • Poetry » Other, Realistic Re: earl grey

    This so beautiful. It captures this melancholy feeling of exhaustion and pain and sadness. The way the character stirs the tea, but is so caught up in her broken promises ...

    Nov 6, 2020
  • Poetry » Realistic, Romantic Re: So this is Love

    This is just stunning. This really is love, its wonderful, painful, and more often than not, leaves you in tears. And you captured of it, all of that beautiful, agonizing ...

    Nov 5, 2020
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Health Re: Wicked Things

    Wow this is really good and I love the intense feeling. I really love your use of imagery and the dark feeling of the poem. If I had to critique ...

    Nov 5, 2020
  • Poetry » General, General Re: algebra woes

    I really love this! You turned something very ordinary into beautiful poetry. It captures the struggles of math and how irritating it is when you can't get it right, but ...

    Nov 5, 2020
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Another Candle & Another Year

    This is a great poem, especially for your first try. It does a very nice job of capturing that feeling of growing up and the nostalgia for your childhood. I ...

    Nov 5, 2020
  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, Realistic Re: That Old, Broken Fence - Prologue

    Wow, this is so powerful and really captured my attention. It's amazing how you made it so interesting, from the very beginning, but didn't explain what it was about to ...

    Nov 5, 2020
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: Don't You Dare

    This is stunning and perfectly captures abusive or controlling parents. It's simple, but angry and shows the trauma caused by parents like that. Reading it, I could really feel the ...

    Nov 5, 2020


The secret of being tiresome is to tell everything.
— Voltaire