Autumn

I started reading the uglies about a year ago but I only got to about half way because my mum ended up giving the book away to charity >.> I ...

thanks for the crits you two, they were helpful :D I'll go make the grammar edits now and when I get a chance do I re-write

lol I just read it through and I see what you mean, I didn't even realise I was doing it =P thanks for pointing it out! Onced I've got this ...

thanks KJ =]

thankyou both! =]

kitty15 - thanks for the review! =] *goes make edits* ["Master, why do you insist on aiding the world before?" [This should probably be '...why did you insist...' because it ...

STARRY nite - thanks! =]

Karinikanicoleroy - thankyou! =] Blue Fairy - Thanks alot! =] The golden eyes are sposed to be the wolf's, I see how it could be confuzing though, I'll think about ...

thanks CarryIt_toGod =]

thanks for the comments and crits =] One of the things I thought was weird was that the only one happy about the death of their captors was Russ. Shouldn't ...

thanks everyone! =] "Because in my world, it means everything to be a magician-- something I can never be." Yeh I think that sounds better, thanks *changes*

I thought it was pretty good up to like the 8th line, then I got kinda confuzed.

Thanks a bunch for the comments and crit, I really appreciate it! I'll get it edited in a sec.

really? thankyou very much! ^^ I'll go make the edits, pretty sure fuelled is spelt with 2 L's though?

Thanks for the replies and crit everyone! =] I'll go edit the grammar, and when I do the rewrite I'll take into account all your advice x