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They are pretty good

Sometimes :D usually when I'm writing. @fandomsNmusic is a Panic! At the Disco fan actually,

Post the edited version, they will love it :*

Not really, jus un-edited

Oh my gosh, this was before Eden-chan or I did any editing isn't it? You should publish the edited first part >.

That makes sense, most authors use either all caps or not at all for consistency and so your mix threw me off a little. But if it is a stylistic ...

I think you just broke my standards....

yeh

Yo Rain-San, thanks for the review. earlier Payds 'tripped over grass' so I had to incorporate it into the story

Okay, I won't :D

oh good Lord, excuse me while I burn the physical copy >.

*cringes* did I really write this?

Thanks Rad!

Ahhhh. A review I can work with, thank you! You say it is confusing? Herm... I guess I need to make it more easily understood... Thank you!

Good day to you and thank you ever so much for your feedback. To begin with, this piece was supposed to be melodramatic, I am very glad that you picked ...