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Just popping onto my account to say that 5-6 years later as a 23 y/o adult with a bipolar diagnosis among others- I now have an explanation instead of "im ...

Just popping onto my account to say that 5-6 years later as a 23 y/o adult with a bipolar diagnosis among others- I now have an explanation instead of "im ...

I appreciate this review, and your openness, quite a lot. La Muerte is Spanish, it translates as "death." So while you're perceivance of hope in the last line is entirely ...

But then, that's the fun aspect of poetry; format is not dictated by standard literary nuances. and the i's asked to be lowercase, so I let them be. Thank you ...

Funnily enough, I was just looking at this earlier today and thinking "this was almost exactly a year ago. I've gotten so much better." This particular one was written after ...

Thank you so much for your encouragement! I agree, that sentence did seem too bulky, thank you for the suggestion. And all the lowercase i's were intentional. Sometimes the uppercase ...

Ugh, thanks for pointing out the coding issue! I forgot that it's different than it used to be, I'll work on fixing that

My father and I have discussed it, but he will never accept it. He'll go so far as to kick me out if I keep pushing it.

won't*

Oh! I apologize, I must have misread that! As for the formatting issue, did you write and submit it on a phone? Because sometimes the site glitches when you do, ...

Hullo niteowl, thanks for the review, i really appreciate it! I guess I wasn't expecting a reaction like this... I suppose it's worth saying that this poem was written in ...

Oops, I used slash instead of italics.... sorry!

Hey Mav! Thank you so much for your review. First, to clear up your confusion, and probably the confusion of other readers; I used the lines I have access to ...

Thank you so much! This i super helpful, i like like your suggestion, "You become my all with your every action and word." I'm actually going to use that :)

Hello ABC123! First off, thank you for this review; it was very helpful. I especially appreciate your third suggestion, i couldn't think of the proper wording, and you've helped more ...