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Hello! So I stumbled upon this and decided to read it because it looked interesting. I like this work, at first I was thinking it was boring and almost went ...

Hello! This is great, I know a lot of authors (including myself) have written poems about sleep, or rather lack of therof; but I really like this one and I ...

Yes yes yes... Oh sorry, Hello. So James is still a jerk, but now he is a tolerable jerk. Will he come back? Please say no. Emily, she seems unstable, ...

What's up? This chapter is making me sad, so I will probably not make it through many more times checking for errors. James is... We'll come back to him... maybe. ...

Hello again! Well, that puts a damper in my joy. So James... You know what? He is terrible, agreed? So let's move on. Meg and Emily seem to be having ...

Oh crap. So I'm back! So um, great job. Emily sounds like a fantastic person, who be this 'James' bloke? So I think we learned a bit more about Meg ...

Hello, I'm back (again). This looks really good, it feels like something is building up. So Meg (a.k.a Py) is getting along well in college, has a new best friend, ...

This chapter was really good (just like the rest), great job. I really liked this, the setting is good (I know nothing about college either) and you added another good ...

To start with; oh-my-goodness-that-was-so-awe-inspiring-that-I-just-cannot. Ok, now that I have that out of the way, you did an amazing job. I feel like amazing is an overused word, because really it ...

Hello again, Hurray, Isabelle is back! I like that character... This chapter was good, it seemed slightly like a filler chapter or like it was slowly transitioning from one part ...

Hello Falconer, To start with, I have loved this story. I decided that I would read all your chapters today, so there's that. You are very good with expressing your ...

So this starts off and you are thinking, "Just another kid saying that they are allergic to homework." But this is not the case with your work of art here, ...

That was an interesting read. It is fascinating where thoughts go, twisting and turning on a path of curiosity when there is no set trail for them. It rhymed, but ...

To start with, this was really funny! I was lacking stuff to read today and ended up here, surfing the YWS stories for things that looked interesting; this did. It ...

To start with, great job! This portrays a feeling that every author, good or bad, has felt at one time or another. Whether you are a poet, a novelist, a ...