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First off, I'm impressed. When I first saw the description, I thought 'great ANOTHER how to train your dragon knockoff' but the story, while holding loosely to other ideas, is ...

Hello! Nice chapter! I must say, there are a few small grammatical errors, but none so significant that many will notice it. Nice duel narrative, it is a nice quality ...

Hello Pink!! Authorian here for a review! I enjoyed the description at the beginning of the story. It was descriptive, well paced, but not too dragged out. You gave us ...

I'm not a great reviewer, but I must say, I am in awe. You writing is flowing and consistent. You tenses are correct, your grammar is flawless. You did well ...

Hello! Nice introduction, we understand the character very well from the beginning. You did well with introducing the character and the atmosphere of the town. I think I will continue ...

I don't know enough about poems to write a review on the technical stuff. But you did really well! The flow and beat is perfect. It's fantasy but sensible. Simple, ...

Hey Doni Nice article! You got good material and wrote on a consistent topic. I like the writing and am intrigued by your view point. I feel similar about regret. ...

Hello Plasmarift!! Excellent story. I like the humor and randomness. You were present in the story as the narrator and just let the humor flow. Never ending, slowing, stopping, or ...

I read a few of the other reviews and a few people said you lost them... You didn't lose me. I could understand the story perfectly... and I must say... ...

Hello Kelpies. Nice poem. To be honest, I can relate. Writing: The writing is well presented and flows well. And the mood is consistent and present. Feel: It made me ...

I was a bit skeptical for the first few lines. But was quickly drawn in. It's a sweet poem, with a flowing, consistent beat. I like the idea of 'The ...

Don't think I'm weird but I love this little story! I'm sure you know of the grammatical errors and left them cause you didn't want to change it, so I ...

Excellent story. It's short, simple, and elegant. The wording is good and the point of view works well. I especially like the tension you present at the beginning. Then you ...