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Love is always painful , no matter what we do, when, why or how. Even if everything seems quite fine, there is always kind of a trick that bothers you, ...

I can say I have suggestions or possible corrections. Of course there are some mistakes that have been mentioned before, but that is minor in my opinion. The Main point ...

Great! "But you will never listen, They won't break your spirit down, Because you are an angel! When time comes, you will fly…" I wish it was as true as ...

Well, that is quite intriguing. The wishing is great, truly, and the way you phrased it is quite impressive. If it's dedicated to someone, wait for enormous applause =). No ...

Nice one! However, I must say that it has a bit problems with rhyme at the end of each part. Was it written that way in purpose? Because the lack ...

Hard times are only making us stronger. Don't put your hands up! Just believe in yourself, and you'll be able to conquer whatever you want! And to cry is fine... ...

Well, as said many times, you have to work on this poem. The idea is quite intriguing, and to be honest, I would like to read the poem after it ...

"People are the most strange thing that exists on this planet." (Was written in one of my favorite books, though I'm not sure this is the correct phrase). Most of ...

Masks are always a bit heavy to carry, don't you think? I'm familliar with this feeling, when too much is lying on you, too much lies, too much false hope. ...

For a poem, where you "tangled" the horror (?) and the innocence, it's something new, and quite sensitive. I liked the idea of the poem, though I cannot express it ...

Fall away from this world With its hatred With its violence With its uncertain future Fall away from the disasters Fall away from the jealousy Fall away from the greed ...

Though you say it's not connected to The Matrix, I can see some similarity. Like the first and the last parts. However, as I see and understand them, the whole ...