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I Never Thought

I never thought you'd be that guy.

Other people act that way
But I never thought I'd see the day
That you would be that cliche

I never thought you'd be that guy.

The dad who yells, the one who's mad
The one who tells you that you're bad
The one that never shows he's glad

I never thought you'd be that guy.

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Aust
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Aust wrote a review · Tue Oct 21, 2008 7:46 pm

"People are the most strange thing that exists on this planet." (Was written in one of my favorite books, though I'm not sure this is the correct phrase). Most of the time people are unpredictable, don't you agree? Today you see a most finest person, and tomorrow this very man throws a dish into your face... Well, no matter, just slap him back (just kidding).

No, really, we are unpredictable, and that's also proved in your poem. I agree with you, with your way of thought =). I liked it.


Aust.



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