Audy

Tinydancer! It's good to see you again. Let me just say, I love this. I love the concept of it, and the tone, and I love your diction in this ...

Hannah, I think this poem does interesting things with imagery. Interesting, because the images seem to have several fragments or parts adrift. I get this with the blue bird, the ...

Hey Sparkle, You seem relatively new to YWS, so I just want to welcome you c: It's good to see your writing, I'm what you call a poetry buff on ...

Hey love. Ooh, Aley, there are some interesting sounds and effects going on here, this one is a must-read-out-loud piece, and I'm loving the rhythm and the freedom free verse ...

Reowine, We haven't met, so I'll introduce myself - I'm a poetry buff, and if you're gonna produce stuff like this on a regular basis, then we will become the ...

Hey Infinity, Welcome to YWS! I happen to love Lewis Carroll's Alice, so your title dragged me right in, if I may say, you chose an excellent subject ;) I ...

Gummiebaerrs, Glad to see you again! I see you've had some hard-hitting reviews already! I'm going to try my best not to repeat, so let's dive right into this! Hannah ...

Reowine, Hello there, Reo. It's good to meet you and see something of yours posted! I'm Audy and I just wanted to welcome you to YWS and also hoping that ...

Hey Nomad, I've seen you around a bit, so I'm glad to catch some more of your poems. The conciseness of this piece, and that willingness to describe and capture ...

-friendly princess wave- Kitty! I love acrostics, like a nostalgic childhood macNcheese staple, yumness. Immediately, I am liking the sounds here, the blues and the mutes and the suits, and ...

Pengu, I think I've seen this before, I have a vague recollection of that delicious first line and I'm not sure if I've seen it in workshop or during one ...

Mr. Lumishinsire, What is it with you and jonquils? --Fione. I'll let you have that one, because that first line (phrase, more like) was so fantastic. Let's talk about perfume/loam ...

Kafka, So good to see you ^-^

Bilbos, Welcome to YWS! I hope you are enjoying the site so far, I just wanted to drop in and say that I absolutely love your username :3

Hey Captainfinnicky, It's Audy here with a review, I can be somewhat blunt/harsh, so just let me know if you have any questions or want to chat this up sometime. ...