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Pers, The line about slam poetry actually brings to mind that this would be something really powerful performed up on stage and read out loud with all the reverberation and ...

Salttlifee, There are some beautiful lines and sentiments in this poem, but immediately what struck out was the repetitive "two people" that I would suggest leaving out. It's not really ...

Hey Emilyleigh! This review will just be my overall comments and thoughts. If at any point during my review something doesn't make sense, or I'm getting the wrong interpretations, or ...

Hey Rosan, Great concept poem. You've got a lovely, smooth-flowing narrative here and I appreciate your efforts in rhyme, I felt it was pretty seamless, nothing really stuck out as ...

Hey Alfred, oOoh, let me just say that this sent tingles down my spine, I like the meanderings of voice and where you were taking me. I get the sense ...

Hey Santana, First off -- I love your username, man c: I also like and agree with a lot of the things you had to say about love, but I ...

Hey there Jadefox! K actually gave you quite a helpful and comprehensive review, so I'm going to take a different route with this review and use it as a framework ...

Hey Manisha, Cute poem ;) I like how you did experiment with the form and aesthetics of your poem, it does make it a little neat to read/cool to look ...

Hey Lyssiekins, First off, I just want to welcome you to YWS C: I hope you enjoy it here, if you stick around, you'll soon find that your writing will ...

Hey Toe, So, what I got from this is that it's a poem about a speaker who is alone, perhaps even told through the eyes of a dove, and is ...

Twiiit! Way to capture a moment. This review is gonna be short cause my phone - but happy to chat this out with ya anytime. Loreal lipgloss, great detail. I ...

Hey Ita, I'm glad you brought this to my attention, it was actually an enjoyable read. Mind, I felt it's enjoyability was directly proportional to how much time I was ...

'lo Preten, I deeply feel the crescendo of the piece. It gets bogged down a bit there in the middle, but overall, the swell of the music works together with ...

Music, Welcome to YWS! Your first poem posted on here, and you say it's from an English class? I would love to see more from you, this I enjoyed very ...

Hey Storyisking, Can I just say your avatar is awesome? I hold so much love for Miyazaki and all of his masterpieces ^-^ But let's dive right into this poem, ...