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AudreyMarie

  • Poetry » Dramatic, Romantic Re: Please look.

    I'm so glad you liked the piece! I really appreciate the review :) Thank you!!

    Dec 1, 2014
  • Poetry » Other, Humor Re: Dear mermaid on the Starbucks logo

    I love it! Never really thought about it but I will definitely think of this poem every time I get Starbucks now :) Very clever

    Nov 19, 2014
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Romantic Re: Please look.

    Aww thank you!! :) I'm so glad you enjoyed it! When I wrote it I was thinking more along the lines of the person wanting them to look to see ...

    Nov 13, 2014
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Romantic Re: Please look.

    You think so? Well I will definitely start working on another one then!! Thank youu againnn!! :)

    Nov 12, 2014
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Romantic Re: Please look.

    Thank you so much!!! The fact that you found this piece true to your own heart makes me so happy, that I can write something that someone can feel a ...

    Nov 12, 2014
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Romantic Re: Please look.

    Aw this review just made my day! I'm so glad you liked it!! Definitely a very personal piece for me so I was a bit nervous if people would like ...

    Nov 12, 2014
  • Poetry » Literature, Romantic Re: Second Chances

    Of course! And I cant wait to see your next piece! :)

    Nov 12, 2014
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: For You

    Note: This review has been deleted

    Nov 12, 2014
  • Poetry » Romantic, Dramatic Re: One Day Maybe

    OKAY!!! Thanks!!! :)

    Nov 6, 2014
  • Poetry » Romantic, Dramatic Re: One Day Maybe

    Yay!!! I will be sure to review if you do!!! :)

    Nov 5, 2014
  • Poetry » Romantic, Dramatic Re: One Day Maybe

    DEFINITELY POST IT!!!!!!!!

    Nov 5, 2014
  • Short Story » Dramatic, General Re: Darkness.

    Will do!! :)

    Nov 5, 2014
  • Short Story » Dramatic, General Re: Darkness.

    Thank you so much for the review! I think you really understood what I was trying to say! I am so glad that you did! The comparison of what the ...

    Nov 5, 2014
  • Short Story » Dramatic, General Re: Darkness.

    Thank you so much for the input!! I certainly agree that it would read much smoother if I were to break it up into paragraphs, I will be sure to ...

    Nov 4, 2014
  • Short Story » Dramatic, General Re: Darkness.

    Thank you so much for the feedback!! I completely agree with the over use of dark, darkest, and darkness, I was unsure of what other words to use but now ...

    Nov 4, 2014


For a short space of time I remained at the window watching the pallid lightnings that played above Mont Blanc and listening to the rushing of the Arve, which pursued its noise way beneath. The same lulling sounds acted as a lullaby to my too keen sensations; when I placed my head upon my pillow, sleep crept over me; I felt it as it came and blessed the giver of oblivion.
— Mary Shelley, Frankenstein