AudreyMarie

Wow, I really like this! Showing all of the stages of depression and then ending (or not ending) with the end of life is brilliant. Maybe instead of re writing ...

I assume you intentionally put "sailing" instead of "saying" in the first line of the second stanza in which I found that very clever! I really enjoyed your poem. It ...

First off, welcome to YWS!!! :) Congrats on posting! Let's get right into this. First off, I liked how you put "broke up, split, separated" it added a nice flare. ...

Aw this poem just makes me smile! I love it! So much poetry is dark and cryptic but this was simple and lighthearted, yet clever. I really liked the voice ...

Wow... This poem is so emotional. Wonderful in its simplicity, yet powerful and dramatic. I like how this poem is from a point of view that is usually not portrayed. ...

I absolutely love this piece!! It is simplistic, yet conveys such a deep though process. I really liked the part about the little secret, and the foreshadowing of the future ...

Such a thought provoking poem, I really liked how the last line gave that possibility that the error is in yourself. Also really liked the morning and night comparison with ...

I absolutely adore the paragraph "I rest my head....where I got that trait from." It really captures the emotion of the daughter without being overly sappy. The ending is wonderful ...