Attolia

Hey. I actually just wrote a story very similar to this, and I'm a complete Holocaust nerd. As well as a proud Zionist, though I guess that's neither here or ...

I deserve to be getting into a millions apologies right here, but I think they get old. Still, I'm sorry. It takes me a while to get to things, and ...

Heyyyy. So I'm finally here; sorry about that. I actually read this a little while ago, but reviewing takes more time. I hadn't missed much, or so Alex kept repeating ...

Hahaha, I know nothing of poetry, and I have no idea what any of that meant, but I actually really liked this. It made me laugh, but like, in a ...

Heyyyyy. :) I raised both eyebrows. "You don't know what you're talking about." Ben's mouth turned into a grim line. He picked up pace, dragging me along with his arm. ...

Go poop your pants somewhere else, Gal. You're stinking up my thread. That made me laugh out loud. I wouldn't have commented but for my need to let you know ...

I read your other version and am happy to say I like this one WAY better - mostly due to the way you changed her perspective so that now she ...

A million apologies. I swear I'm getting worse, right? But in my defense, I do have my reasons; I graduated this week and had neither the time nor the mental ...

So, I actually liked this a lot. It was a pretty intriguing start; I've very interested to know the story behind her and her sisters and what they were made ...

Hey Lena, haven't seen you in a while. This isn't going to be a very good or lengthy critique, partly cause I don't feel like it and mostly because this ...

Hey Wheadee. So... drug dealers. That's pretty tough stuff to write. I can't really get a feel of your MC right now; he seems too contradictory. You didn't make him ...

Hey there. This was pretty good for an 11 year old. "Uh-oh... OK Rachael prepare yourself. Usually when she calls from the bathroom you get traumatized greatly." Rachael said, remembering ...

Heyyy. Sorry for getting here so late, and my apologies in advance cause I don't think this will be a very lengthy review - but that's because I'm having trouble ...

Aaww, good! About time! Two chapters ago when Henri was at school, all I was thinking was poor Henri! And what a jerk is your protagonist. (By the way, what's ...

Woah, that's some intense stuff. But you dove into that way too quickly. We never even got a chance to really meet Jenny (and I did go back and read ...