AttackOfTheFlash

It's quite good for 250 words! Good job. It certainly speaks the truth! (Especially about the set of rules within a group). But ya know what's better than few friends? ...

Thank you so much for the review! I appreciate your suggestions! With the lines in between the stanzas, each time I tried to put a space between them they squished ...

Thank you so much for this review! It helped me a lot and I will definitely take all you said into consideration when/if I revise this and when I write ...

Thanks so much for the feedback! I greatly appreciate it. Yes, this was my first time seriously writing poetry (other than the cheesey childish stuff I mentioned in my author's ...

Wow, thank you for the kind words! I honestly expected some harsh criticism with this being my first time. Honestly, I just kind of meant for them to be generic ...

Thank you so much for the feedback! I really appreciate it! And I didn't know that about the formatting, thanks for the advice.

I usually don't even pay attention to poetry, but this title made me wonder what it was about so I decided to give it a read. I'm a fan of ...

I shall return tomorrow to review this. :D

Thanks for the feedback! I really appreciate it. :) My intention for the laboratory was meant to be a chemist lab. If it really sounds like a meth lab then ...

Gah, stupid me! It is in present. Please, pleas forgive me for that. I don't know what I was thinking this morning. I'm terribly sorry.

No problem! That's still impressive though! (At least for someone who takes days to write first drafts)

I'm not going to review this because I have absolutely no knowledge about poetry, but I will say it's a good start in my opinion. I can't write poetry either! ...

I have a question: how is this a chapter? It is only a description, so why post it to get reviews? While it does sound like a good book, there ...

I see. It's a cool style! No problem and I can't wait to read more!

I shall be back to review this when Review Day starts. :)