AttackOfTheFlash

Hello! Flash here for a review! Okay, there's really not much I have to say. I honestly didn't find any grammatical mistakes. Good job on that! So today I'll mainly ...

Hello! Flash here for a review! :D :D :D I've wanted to review this for forever now, but I haven't had the time. But I'm here now! And I intend ...

Hello! Flash here for a review. Okay, first I want to say that no, I haven't read the first two chapters. I saw that this has been in the green ...

Hello! Flash here for a review! Wow, this was really good! It was nicely written and is filled with good, descriptive details. Good job! I must say I like it ...

Hello! Flash here for a short review. I didn't find anything grammatically incorrect. Then again, I'm not the best with grammar, so someone might find something I've overlooked. I must ...

Hello! Flash here for a review. Hmm.. It seems like you're "telling" instead of "showing" in this piece. The first paragraph could work as an introduction to this world you've ...

Hello! Flash here for a quick review. First of all, I will admit that I haven't yet read the prologue to this (but I will soon). So I'm going off ...

Hello! I'm Flash, here for a short review. I didn't see any grammar mistakes. That's awesome! But then again, I'm not the best at grammar, so someone else may find ...

Hello! I'm Flash, and here is a very short review. First of all, I'd like to say it was an interesting piece. I found it very descriptive! It's dark, but ...

Hello! I'm Flash and I intend on reviewing this piece. For starters, the style is very lovely. I noticed that it says that you are eleven, which is amazing! I ...

Hello! I'm Flash, and I will be reviewing this story. Okay, so the imagery is very nice. It certainly is a wonderland! For some reason it kind of reminded me ...

Hello! I'm Flash! Before I begin, I'd like to say that it's been a few years since I've read a Warrior cats book, so this work reminded me of my ...

Hello! This is pretty interesting, and a nice start for your book! :) I completely agree with everything the first reviewer said. It's good advice I would consider following. Other ...

Hello! Attack here for a review! (Welcome to YWS, by the way!!) :) I really didn't see anything grammatically incorrect, but I'm not too good at grammar myself. Thus, I ...

Hi! This is my first time reviewing poetry (and I am no poet) so please bare with me. :) I think this is a stunning poem. It's truly beautiful, and ...