AttackOfTheFlash

Hello! Flash here for a review. All I can say is: wow. Why is this in the green room?! The length must be scaring people away. While it is somewhat ...

Hello! Flash here for a quick review. The only thing I can say is: wow. This is awesome, no doubt about it! I took this as a satirical narrative (wait, ...

Hello! Flash here for a review! I commented earlier and now I'm back to actually review this awesome piece. First, let's look at the technical aspects. I didn't see any ...

Hello! Flash here for a quick review. Just... wow. This was a very interesting beginning! There are many things that were a tad confusing, but I'm sure such things will ...

Hello! Flash here for a review. It's a short prologue, so I won't have much to say here. But let's get on with it. The first line is awesome! It's ...

Hello! Flash here for a quick review. This was certainly interesting. The details are great! Everything was very vivid and smooth. I noticed that you said in your welcoming thread ...

Hello! Flash here for a review. I saw this hanging out in the Green Room and decided to stop by. :) The first thing I would like to address is ...

Hello! Flash here for a review. Alright, let's see what we've got here. Animal smuggling, fun!! I honestly didn't see any grammar mistakes. Good job on that! I noticed you ...

Hello! Flash here for a review! I decided to stop by because I do happen to be a fan of the creepy pastas. :) Even though the title is what ...

I realized I never reviewed this. I've got a few minutes before I have to go so let's see if I can do this! I love love LOVE this prologue! ...

Hello dearie! I finally got around to reading this! Yay! Okay, let's get to it. It was awesomely descriptive and detailed. Good job on that! I especially love the description ...

Hello! Flash here for a short review. I didn't see many mistakes in this piece. Good job on that! But here are a couple things I did happen to notice: ...

Hello, welcome to YWS! I'm Flash, here for a quick review! I noticed that you said that you really weren't focused on the grammar and stuff, but grammar and other ...

Hello! Flash here for a review! Before I begin I would like to say that no, I haven't read the previous chapters. It was easy to pick up and understand, ...

Hello! Flash here for a quick, short review. I noticed this was still hanging out in the Green Room even after a few comments. So here I am! After reading ...