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Re: The Boy Who Survived
Hello, Flash here for a quick review as requested. The style in this work is very nice. It's descriptive and sounds pretty professional if you ask me. :) You defiantly ...
Apr 15, 2015 -
Re: Chapter 1: Nothing Lasts Forever
Hello! Flash here for a quick review. Wow, this was a every intriguing read! I enjoyed it greatly and I'm interested in what happens next. Your style is amazing. It's ...
Apr 15, 2015 -
Re: Oblivion - Chapter One
Hola! Flash here for a review. Hmm, a science fiction adventure! Seems pretty interesting right now. It's just started and it looks like you've got a pretty solid plot line ...
Apr 14, 2015 -
Re: Turn out your Light. Revised Version.
Hello! Flash here for a review, here to help save this work from the depths of the Green Room! I love historical fiction *so* much, and I'm especially intrigued by ...
Apr 13, 2015 -
Re: Diablo
Hello! Flash here for a review. I came to read this because I absolutely LOVE horses! I don't ride so I'm a bit uncultured when it comes to events (jumping, ...
Apr 11, 2015 -
Re: The Stars were Falling
Hello! I saw this and decided to help save it from the Green Room. Alright, let's start with the story first. It was really nice and cute, but I kind ...
Apr 7, 2015 -
Re: This is it: Prologue
Hello! Flash here for a quick review. I don't have much to say here because it is a short piece without a lot of faults. And that's okay, I believe ...
Apr 4, 2015 -
Re: Forest of the Spirits.
Hello! Flash here for a review. Wow, this was a short, sweet, whimsical little story. The beginning kind of reminded me of the movie The Secret of Kells. Very whimsical ...
Apr 3, 2015 -
Re: Holocaust In My Eyes
Hello, Flash here for a quick review. What drew me in was the title, because I'm a fan of historical fiction (particularly WWII for some reason). It's a deep, heartbreaking ...
Mar 31, 2015 -
Re: To The Stars Above (chapter 1)
Hello! Flash here as requested. I meant to review this yesterday but something unexpected came up. Terribly sorry about that and I hope this review will make up for it! ...
Mar 19, 2015 -
Re: Celestial: Spark of War; Prologue & Chapter 1
Hello! Flash here as requested. Okay, let's dive into this. As far as technical errors go, I only caught a handful. Since this is a very long piece and the ...
Mar 17, 2015 -
Re: Escaping F.A.T.E.
Hello! Flash here for a review. I saw this and decided to read it. I first read two reviews below and was absolutely APPALLED! The two reviews below are terribly ...
Mar 16, 2015 -
Re: Vex~Chapter 3
Flash here! I have *finally* returned to review this next installment of Vex! I commented a couple days ago saying I would be back the next day to review. Well, ...
Mar 15, 2015 -
Re: The Kanto Kronicles Prologue
Hello! Flash here for a quick review. I didn't see any grammar mistakes or technical errors. Awesome job on that! Although I will point out that the first paragraph is ...
Mar 10, 2015 -
Re: Deleted content
Hello! Flash here for a review. This seems pretty interesting. I didn't see any glaring mistakes here. Grammar and the technical side look good. Good job on that! But there ...
Mar 10, 2015