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i have. it was good, yet i'm slighty wary of it's orange for fiction award...for some reason.

there was no emotion and i didnt feel anything when i read this. it as too concise and also confusing. but keep up the good work :)

uh...thanks for the comments guys :) as i said, it isnt one of my best

thansk for the comments. this isnt one of the best i've wrtten, just wanted to see what you guys thought. :).

i like this. i like how it feels almost real... i feel what you feel expecialy when i read this. excellent poem, keep up the good work

i enjoyed, thought both books were great reads. i preffered the first one though.

ooo, i didnt know it was featured this month. thanx... v. happy for that plus, thanx for all your comments

i agree with lamalama, although it is kind of funny. maybe if it was longer it would have brought a point across.

my bad...

shoudn't this be in the lyrics section? ahh well. it's good, but i had a little trouble flowing with it...

i like this, and i agree with you, although i have never played the cello before. i like the instrument and the sound, its unique. it's a shame this among ...

i'm unsure what to make of this poem it's different... theres a couple of spelling mistakes...maybe this is a new approach to poetry i dont know. i didnt catch the ...

it sounds like rant to me, and the flow, if there was ment to be any, kind of put me off. i didnt feel anything whilst reading it unfortunatly, if ...

wow, i really like the first one and the ending is really good. the second one, was good, alot of descritpions although i was slightly confused with the theme. keep ...

i was slightly confused with the first two lines. skin smells like heat? maybe it's mebut i dont really understand that the "oh" seems alittle out of place but its ...