Young Writers Society

Classy, once again you leave me with an unedited story. I didn't read any of the other reviews because I was too lazy too, so I hope I'm not repeating ...

“So, you know what we are here for then?” Asks the other man with the dark skin, deep black hair and cold eyes. A wide smile spreads across his face, ...

Hello my evil half. Err... equal half. But about twenty stood tall. They weren’t going to let the enemy bring them down. They might have lost everything they had, and ...

“Uh…well, no , Max,” She said, taken aback, “ A nother five minutes, I think, according to my map here.” “Cool,” was my answer, and I pulled out my music ...

Howler, that was an incredible story. Everything about it was enjoyable. The sentence structure made it read smoothly. I don't think I've ever found a story on here as easy ...

Hello there. I must warn you, I am still very much under the torture of a virus taking over my body. So not even I know how my comments on ...

A heap of broken bones lay there The caved in skulls, the marrows of the ribs split open The lair of unwholesome beasts unveiled As did my knuckles whiten on ...

Hello there, I shall be your reviewer today. Be prepared for a long and grueling set of controversies. No, I am totally kidding. I'm always a nice reviewer. :smt036 The ...

Hello, I'll be your reviewer today before somebody comes along and gives you any brutal criticism. :P I ran out onto the street, my head swimming. Adding an "out" makes ...

Delilah Shayne finished her make up solemnly, and looked at her refection in her the vanity mirror, and sighed. Her ash-blonde hair was in perfect place, softly falling on her ...

Hello, Ahmed. I said I would check out your prologue and I have. :) Note: I will use smilies a lot, in hopes that they may make some harsh words ...

But you are good at describing things. Believe it or not, a lot of writers struggle to describe scenery and create mood. The thing is, that is the difference between ...

You haven't even received a review. :( *Will review at some point later today* :wink:

Hello irsihfire. :smt039 I will put my comments and suggestions in bold font. I will put words and phrases/sentences that confuse me, or are obvious mistakes in blue. I shall ...

Hello there, here as requested a while ago. :D I was having trouble finding the message you sent me to review your work. I was like who was that guy ...