Asma

oh! thanks a lot zarah.... :D

ahem..ahem! :P

HI Swarnima...thanks for the review and i will surely keep those pointers in my mind next time....but i really don't know how to work the rhythm though :D ... thanks ...

OH! thanks manal! I really worked on it and my hardwork is paying off...and yeah i'll surely try to make those corrections.. :) Thanks again!

oh! thanks a lot, it really means so much to me...and surely i'll keep on writing :D

okay, so good to hear i had lesser mistakes and thanks for reviewing my poem.... :D I dont know how to work on my rhythm but i'll try to, :P ...

You're welcome...but not always.. :P

haha lol.....i just said you twice and you corrected both of them and now....uh! no place for goodwill left on this earth!!! and for your kind information, its Thank You ...

sleepying?!!!!

yeah sure go ahead!!! at least 'someone' can do that...because i cant. So let him know it na... :P

Its good and my review is above!

I liked your story and just wanted to give a small review on it. :) Okay, my friends covered almost everything up there...but to sum up all that i guess ...

Great, right! By the way, thanks a lot for the compliments. Seriously, it means a lot, especially as it is my first (official) poem. And i would also like to ...

i like mr blue moon not Cuz he's egyption so no way you're not calling him E- Crush.. :P

nice....eagerly waiting for the next chapter :D