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Asith

  • Short Story » General, General Re: i wonder (may have turned into me just missing my family and crying while typing and changing names)

    Hi, I like your poem :) I hope you're doing okay. If venting helps you then talking about it will too; people here are nice. That's all I have to ...

    Dec 23, 2019
  • Short Story » Science Fiction, Technology Re: The Censor

    Thanks for the review :)

    Dec 9, 2019
  • Short Story » Science Fiction, Technology Re: The Censor

    Thanks!

    Dec 7, 2019
  • Short Story » Dramatic, General Re: Sinnerman

    Sounds great :) This post could help you with more bbcode :)

    Sep 29, 2019
  • Short Story » Realistic, General Re: Lies

    What the narrator is lying about is entirely unclear, but I thought that was the point. It's clearly something that deserves guilt, and has some connection to money, but other ...

    Sep 26, 2019
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: The Cosmic Dragon: Chapter 3

    Sep 17, 2019
  • Short Story » Science Fiction, Mystery / Suspense Re: Detachment: Obsolete

    Hey, thanks for the review! I'm going to redact the bit about good morals and replace it with something less positive :) Thanks for your other advice too!

    Sep 16, 2019
  • Short Story » Culture, Dramatic Re: Never Give Up

    Sep 11, 2019
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Fantasy Re: Poker With The Devil - Opening Chapter

    You've given me exactly the type of review I was after, cheers!

    Sep 8, 2019
  • Short Story » Narrative, Realistic Re: A Reminiscence

    Oh, cool!

    Sep 7, 2019
  • Short Story » Narrative, Realistic Re: A Reminiscence

    Oh, cool!

    Sep 7, 2019
  • Short Story » Science Fiction, Horror Re: The Digital Man

    Oof

    Aug 28, 2019
  • Short Story » Science Fiction, Horror Re: The Digital Man

    The points about world-building and backstory are actually really insightful, I'm going to try work those into the story now :) Also were you inspired by Black Mirror Nah, as ...

    Aug 27, 2019
  • Poetry » Realistic, Romantic Re: Love and trust.

    Aug 26, 2019
  • Article / Essay » Review, Fanfiction Re: What Hogwarts House Most Popular Among Potterheads?

    As a ravenclaw, I don't really know what to feel :p I did expect Gryffindor to be least popular. The main cast being Gryffindor probably puts a lot of people ...

    Aug 22, 2019


You know that place between sleep and awake, that place where you still remember dreaming? That’s where I’ll always love you. That’s where I’ll be waiting.
— J.M. Barrie, Peter Pan