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Asith

  • Short Story » General, General Re: i wonder (may have turned into me just missing my family and crying while typing and changing names)

    Hi, I like your poem :) I hope you're doing okay. If venting helps you then talking about it will too; people here are nice. That's all I have to ...

    Dec 23, 2019
  • Short Story » Science Fiction, Technology Re: The Censor

    Thanks for the review :)

    Dec 9, 2019
  • Short Story » Science Fiction, Technology Re: The Censor

    Thanks!

    Dec 7, 2019
  • Short Story » Dramatic, General Re: Sinnerman

    Sounds great :) This post could help you with more bbcode :)

    Sep 29, 2019
  • Short Story » Realistic, General Re: Lies

    What the narrator is lying about is entirely unclear, but I thought that was the point. It's clearly something that deserves guilt, and has some connection to money, but other ...

    Sep 26, 2019
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: The Cosmic Dragon: Chapter 3

    Sep 17, 2019
  • Short Story » Science Fiction, Mystery / Suspense Re: Detachment: Obsolete

    Hey, thanks for the review! I'm going to redact the bit about good morals and replace it with something less positive :) Thanks for your other advice too!

    Sep 16, 2019
  • Short Story » Culture, Dramatic Re: Never Give Up

    Sep 11, 2019
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Fantasy Re: Poker With The Devil - Opening Chapter

    You've given me exactly the type of review I was after, cheers!

    Sep 8, 2019
  • Short Story » Narrative, Realistic Re: A Reminiscence

    Oh, cool!

    Sep 7, 2019
  • Short Story » Narrative, Realistic Re: A Reminiscence

    Oh, cool!

    Sep 7, 2019
  • Short Story » Science Fiction, Horror Re: The Digital Man

    Oof

    Aug 28, 2019
  • Short Story » Science Fiction, Horror Re: The Digital Man

    The points about world-building and backstory are actually really insightful, I'm going to try work those into the story now :) Also were you inspired by Black Mirror Nah, as ...

    Aug 27, 2019
  • Poetry » Realistic, Romantic Re: Love and trust.

    Aug 26, 2019
  • Article / Essay » Review, Fanfiction Re: What Hogwarts House Most Popular Among Potterheads?

    As a ravenclaw, I don't really know what to feel :p I did expect Gryffindor to be least popular. The main cast being Gryffindor probably puts a lot of people ...

    Aug 22, 2019


We understand how dangerous a mask can be. We all become what we pretend to be.
— Patrick Rothfuss, The Name of the Wind