Ashley123

I wrote it in the brief description box. I said that I wrote it for a writing contest and that I needed feedback. But it's completely understandable if you didn't ...

Thanks for the review, I'll take your thoughts into consideration and change parts of the essay. Thank you for helping me edit this, I really needed someone to help me ...

I'm sorry. Like I should've said, I know nothing about poetry. I'll try to seek the deeper meaning in future poems that I review.

Cool. I'm glad that I could relate, truly.

I thought that this poem was filled with true meaning and emotion, it really made me feel the emotions that you packed into this piece. I would like to see ...

This poem was pretty good. (Just to be clear, I know nothing about poetry). Now, I liked how you really expressed how you really are NOT a fan of poetry, ...

Thanks for the review. I will work on your suggestions.

I liked this poem. I thought that it really expressed emotion that was inside you. It really portrayed the emotion and left a vivid picture in my mind. You are ...

This poem flowed very well. I thought that it really expressed how stories that are fiction can indeed still relate to our everyday lives. I complement you for relating the ...

Thanks, I'm glad to hear someone liked it.

First of all, the sentences have a lot of grammatical errors. Second of all, you want to capitalize the first letter in the beginning of a new sentence, it's common ...

Thanks, this is only a few chapters that I've done so far.

No problem.

This story is awesome. I really think that your writing skills are so much better than mine. Your so descriptive, and you continue with a strong story line that is ...

This is a very well written piece, I liked how you started off with Cody in a dream of some sorts. The plot is really exciting, it makes me just ...