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  • Poetry » Dramatic, Other Re: Cutter

    Should i write a trigger warning?

    Apr 11, 2015
  • Lyrics » Lyrical, Spiritual Re: Lullaby

    Thanks so much Reet for the great review! And you stayed blessed too!!!

    Apr 11, 2015
  • Short Story » Science Fiction, Fantasy Re: Dystopian Prince - Chapter 1

    Im hooked. Please tell me there is more.

    Apr 11, 2015
  • Poetry » Narrative, Other Re: 18 Stories, Lips do tell

    Oh no, i wasnt offended my dear. I was just explaining that my poem isnt exactly like the observation poems that inspired it. Thats why i changed the name...18 ways ...

    Apr 11, 2015
  • Poetry » Narrative, Other Re: 18 Stories, Lips do tell

    And lip implants can be silicone. Its a more permanent fix than botox injections.

    Apr 11, 2015
  • Poetry » Narrative, Other Re: 18 Stories, Lips do tell

    And lip implants can be silicone. Its a more permanent fix than botox injections.

    Apr 11, 2015
  • Poetry » Narrative, Other Re: 18 Stories, Lips do tell

    Thank you so much. I really appreciate this amazing review. I am very happy you enjoyed it.

    Apr 11, 2015
  • Poetry » Narrative, Other Re: 18 Stories, Lips do tell

    I was, Indeed inspired by Widdershins poem, but I turned mine into,a little something different. Stories can be poetry, and these 18 different moments are pieces of stories, but because ...

    Apr 11, 2015
  • Lyrics » Lyrical, Spiritual Re: Lullaby

    Thank you, and yes I will fix the capitalization immediately. I wrote this for my first child because I hated singing the traditional lullabies, that end with a baby falling ...

    Apr 10, 2015
  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: How does one forget?

    You are very welcome. :)

    Apr 10, 2015
  • Poetry » Action / Adventure, Narrative Re: Mutiny

    Glad to hear my poem made you think about your writing. I didn't expect you to change it all, but remember that the confusion comes from the poem itself not ...

    Apr 10, 2015
  • Poetry » Action / Adventure, Narrative Re: Mutiny

    I took the talk about war meaning that theae guys used to fight for their country as soldiers and the black flag and the pirate code appealed more to them ...

    Apr 10, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Science Fiction, Fantasy Re: The Colony of the Elite. Chapter 1: The Sancternum

    Thank you. I love playing with new words. I learn 10 new words a week to add to my vocabulary. Thats probably why Im so hard on people who use ...

    Apr 10, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Science Fiction, Fantasy Re: The Colony of the Elite. Chapter 1: The Sancternum

    As for the dialogue*

    Apr 10, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Science Fiction, Fantasy Re: The Colony of the Elite. Chapter 1: The Sancternum

    I dont know where the weird %uD83D%uDE0A came from in my last reply. Weird.

    Apr 10, 2015


You're wrong about humanity. They are your greatest creation because they're better than you are. Sure, they're weak, and they cheat and steal and destroy and disappoint, but they also give and create, and they sing and dance and love. Above all, they never give up.
— Metatron