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Thanks so much for the helpful feedback, I shortened that line a little, let me know what you think.

Desdemona, Hi I’m Ashkitten and I’m here to review. I love the philosophical nature of this. I love that it’s thought provoking. These are all questions that we have all ...

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Hi, I’m Ashkitten and I’m here for a review. I must say, this was very well written. I feel like there is double meaning here. The fight for the dawn ...

I am finally revising this piece, after 3 years almost. Let me know what you think now. :)

Wow thanks so much for the encouraging words and extremely wonderful feedback. I agree punctuation is a major tool that could be used and I completely neglected it, I%u2019ll make ...

I can only hope that somehow i can make a difference.

Thank you so much!!! Im a year late reading thjs but it came at the perfect time, thank u!

Ok you got me. I went into this having the garden imagery in mind and this is actually the first time I tried to keep from my deepest seeded emotions ...

Amazing review @Lumi could u possibly find time to review my work?

I feel like I need more from you. I want so badly to feel something from this poem but there's just one little thing missing. The rhymes are a bit ...

My auto correct is going to be the death of me I swear... I meant that's very sweet of you to say* and I saw your comment and it literally ...

Omg! Thanks so much! That's very sweet if you to say! It's funny, I haven't written in months and I was starting to feel like I wasn't worth a crap ...

Thank you Tuesday! You totally made my day. I happen to be struggling with some things right now so I havent been on here at all but it was such ...

Ah whats in a poem? :) genius

Thank you for being brave and sharing that. :) And thank you for all of your kind words. U r awesome!