Ashkitten83

Ok so let me just tell you that you have the most talent I've ever seen in a 14 year old. I'm amazed at how flawlessly it flowed and the ...

Besides whether being spelled incorrectly, and a couple of punctuation errors, I find this poem to be truly endearing. I feel like it brought out so much emotion for love ...

To start, I definitely relate to this piece. I love to read as much as I love to write. I think the title and the first line should match. One ...

Normally I have so much to say but this...brilliant! Don't change 1 thing! It has succeeded at drawing pure raw unadulterated emotions out of my very soul and leaving me ...

I liked the structure, and the back and forth. The title was the only thing that made the ending make sense thoughts. However, with the title in mind it does ...

I have questions. I feel like it may be about one person and not more but you said they to keep it gender neutral, if this is the case, let ...

Short but impactful. How I love poetry that says so much with so little. Previous reviews attacked the grammatical issues, so I'm not going to waste my time on that. ...

I think this poem has great potential. if you don't mind I'm going to dissect it a bit in pieces so it's easily broken down. Dear girl on the train, ...