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Re: That Night
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Aug 9, 2017
Hey there Aaraju, Myjaspercat here to review your poem. Line-by-Line/Nit-Pick Everyday I see him So happy, so innocent he seems I would change the second 'so' here if I were ... -
Re: Jesper Gone.
Damn sorry man I'll remove this
Jul 13, 2017 - Re: My son. Part 1 Jul 13, 2017
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Re: My son. Part 1
gonna leave me hanging like that?
Jul 13, 2017 -
Re: Alone (Part 1)
checkout my new story you'll like that
Jul 13, 2017 -
Re: *Dublin breeze*
Great again Gina a well hidden messae is always appreciated by me this is good on so many levels though stanza's may have worked better but hey whatever gets the ...
Jul 13, 2017 -
Re: untitled document
This was so good! I don't think I can help you out by writing a review because I can't find anything to give some constructive criticism on and because I'm ...
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Re: New Orleans Is Mine.
This was a huge help thank you im working on improving this. but will contact you if i need help. :)
Jul 13, 2017 -
Re: New Orleans Is Mine.
Thank you Gina i'm working on improving this one but means alot that you get this. Have a great day :)
Jul 13, 2017