Aristotle

this is great

Hiya Aristotle, PenNPaper here :D I would like to say that I liked your story, your style of writing. However, I really wanted to read more. Even for a prologue, ...

Look it up in The Bible. *Hint Hint*

The issue you have here is that it's very, very cliched. It's a typical love song about someone leaving the person who is singing. I would try to make this ...

sure. I'll have the next post up by Wednesday, and I'll pm you when i post it. Also, what trans neural transmogrification is will be reveal in part 2 Ages ...

The comment was just a comment... Not part of the story.

A moment of silence for Thresh... A moment of silence for Rue... A moment of silence for Glimmer... A moment of silence for Foxface... A moment of silence for Marvel... ...

Oh man, I meant to use him! I don't know why I wrote Thresh! I'll make changes.

Wow. It was kind of hard to read because of the lack of starting a new paragraph every time someone speaks, but i like the theme! Keep writing, Aristotle (a ...

I've never seen a piece of literature set out like this before, quite unusual but quite interesting too ^^ I have to make a connection here between three and your ...

This isn't a poem... AWKWARD!

Its a visual/concrete poem, so I will have to convert it to PDF (what the heck is PDF? A file format?) Next time I come over your house, Daydreams, I'll ...

Wow, just wow. I really liked this poem, but like Mr. Knightly, I think it was kind of hard to read because of the "what"'s. Keep on writing, Aristotle. (also ...

Hmm... I could try to continue it. It was a one-paragraph assignment, but i will continue it and put it on YWS. Enjoy!

You have to jump without feet! No, thats not fair. You could jump with your hands... Through the air? Still not fair! Well then jump with your head! And if ...