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AriannaC

AriannaC/Minchpunk

  • Poetry » Culture, Realistic Re: What Happens

    Funny how I am literally writing a review for this on the 4th of July! This is going to be a speed review today, so it might not be very ...

    Jul 4, 2017
  • Poetry » Romantic, Realistic Re: Deleted

    Hi Snowmonkey9! I love the meaning behind this poem and the beat of it. The beginning and the end are great. However, in the middle is things start to not ...

    Jul 4, 2017
  • Poetry » Humor, Realistic Re: You Make Me Cry

    You just made me smile, silly goose. I like when poetry isn't always so serious and has some humor in it. This, my friend, is one of those poems. This ...

    Jul 4, 2017
  • Poetry » Realistic, Narrative Re: The Girl In My Reflection

    Hi Authorian! I found that throughout this poem, it felt more like a sob-story than an inspirational poem. However, overall, this had a lot of emotion and heart, which is ...

    Jul 4, 2017
  • Poetry » General, General Re: a diagram explaining my body to you

    This is the second poem that I have seen from you and I can already tell that you are an amazing writer. I honestly believe that you can make a ...

    Jul 2, 2017
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: A Night Sky

    Great poem -APPLAUSE- . One part that really stands out to me is the last part. It gives a quick summary of the whole thing without ruining the beat of ...

    Jun 25, 2017
  • Poetry » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: The Dragon's Doings

    I felt like a dragon reading this! Which is a good thing. Description words where very good and fit the poem well. However, I feel like the repeated word "blue ...

    Jun 25, 2017
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: Bubbles

    When most people write short, sweet poems, they come out a little bland and simple. However, this was not this case with your poem. I found that the last stanza ...

    Jun 3, 2017
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: The Sweet Little Objects

    Here comes my first review! First of all, I thought your imagery and description where spot on. The line " We came from the same imagination. little pieces of dreams ...

    Jun 3, 2017


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