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*pokes Suz* Donde esta Mea Culpa II? Your fans cry out for more!

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Not a writing activity. * Moved to Scripts *

Mary - Thank you so much for reading, sweetheart! Your encouragement is always appreciated. 'Melia! Thank you so much for all your suggestions! They were all very helpful. The weather ...

Ah, Dono, how do we love thee? Let us count the ways... 'Tis lovely, Mesh dear! *applauds*

Do you mean to say I do not need 'round , or do you mean the whole line? Yep, just meant the word itself. The line is great; I just ...

I agree with Snoink. As it is, it's nice, but feels disconnected. Mess with a little and see if you can't get it to work together a little more. I ...

Lyndsey - Thanks for never allowing me to settle for less than my best. Your comment stung more than hurt me, but it was only for a little while, and ...

Well, naturally. ;)

* Abby * The weather was perfect the day that Father and his grand army left the castle for Padua. This seemed only to aggravate Ivy further, and I guessed ...

Clau, you're my hero. :D I really loved your critique. I mean, your critiques are always a pleasure, because you're so thorough and thoughtful and careful to cover everything. But ...

Gee, imagine you, sounding American. As if you are one or something. :P I've heard the first few seconds of it, but now I'm having trouble getting it to load. ...

*wonders why people keep resurrecting a two-and-a-half-year-old poem* Because it's a really freaking amazing two-and-a-half-year-old poem, of course. And Ari, I do remember that, lol. Yeah, it was fun

(( UPDATED 09-12-07 )) I especially messed with that one section that we all hated. If you guys have any more suggestions I'll be your best friend. :mrgreen:

nickelodeon - Thank you for taking the time to read and comment! It really does mean a lot to me. I've been having a lot of trouble with this opening, ...