Areida

Hehe, Nox, isn't it the truth... Thank you, CL! I'm going to look over it later when I can be mean. When I wrote it I was too upset to ...

THANK YOU SO MUCH! *tackle hugs* Heh. Anyway. Transitions, okay... *nods* I'll check on those. Title will work in later, but I think just for the sake of not confusing ...

Well as long as someone can feel the emotion behind it, I'll let my dad look at it then give to my Papa. Thank you all for your help.

Nope, he's got a bib. And he sits at the dinner table calling to by grandmother, "Bib! Maxine, bring my bib! Bib!" Trust me, a lot of the stuff that ...

A lot of this is inside jokes and things that happened; one day one of his old guy friends told him he was an encyclopedia of worthless information and he ...

Thank you so much for reading! I kept checking the thread thinking, "Okay... Nobody loves Ari..." Hee hee. This is only part of chapter three; I think what I'm to ...

That's the vibe I'm getting too.

I know I haven't posted anything on this in ages... but if I'm lucky, someone out there is still willing to read and help me with this poor excuse to ...

Lyndsey! I just looked at your post count! You can make up your own title! *gets really excited* ...Anyway. Now I'll actually comment instead of getting excited over random things ...

Nope, I feel it too. It seemed incomplete, but not in a bad way. It seems like you could make this into a series of short stories or even a ...

I think this poem would have done more for me if someone would have recited it to me. Since I got started on this site, I've lost most of my ...

It was great until the end. The last stanza didn't really wrap up the poem or leave it with any type of resonating effect. Other than that, I liked it ...

Hee hee. You people make me want to write! *goes off to do so*

Hey bard, how goes it? Glad you liked it. :D Hey, there went that warm fuzzy thing again... Sheesh, guys.

Thanks for taking such an in-depth look, Lyndsey. :D I think Bob's got it pretty close, though. I didn't really think about it as I wrote, but I'm pretty sure ...