Areida

Hey Valentine! This is the first thing I've read of yours, and I'm impressed. Good work! Here are a few nitpicks for you, since I don't have any big complaints. ...

I haven't done any critiquing the last year or so, and so while getting back in the swing of things this weekend, I've stuck to short stories and the occasional ...

I'm pretty useless at critiquing poetry, so take my opinion with a grain of salt. I don't really understand what you're trying to accomplish with this poem. It just reads ...

Hey Hiadel! Looks like you've been around YWS for a few months now, so I hope you're still enjoying it. Good to have you! Here are my thoughts on this ...

I'm pretty useless at critiquing poetry, but I liked the trend of robot-isms throughout the poem to go along with the title. Some of the phrases were especially good. I ...

Hey Isha! I recently reviewed your story, "The Day He Hung Up," and I think some of my comments on that piece apply here as well. So here's a big ...

Hi Tranquility! I'm really not much for critiquing poetry, so I can't offer expertise. All I've got is an opinion, so just take mine with a grain of salt. ;) ...

Hey Kaedee! It looks like you've already gotten some feedback, but here are my thoughts on this piece. The Good * Meryl is a cool name. Mrs. Streep shouldn't get ...

Hi Isha! Looks like you've had a pretty productive first month on YWS - that's awesome! So here are my thoughts on this piece: 1) Too fast. One second they're ...

I'm pretty much a fan of anything that ruthlessly mocks Twilight . It doesn't even have to be well-written, because, let's face it: neither is Twilight . This was much ...

Hi youreit! Hopefully you won't find this too repetitive. I just skimmed a couple of the reviews above, so I'm not sure what all has or has not been said, ...

Hi Jagged! I was looking for something to review, and Snoink recommended this piece to me. I reminded her that I am useless at critiquing poetry, but she promised that ...

Where are all the comments that this piece deserves!? I'd really like to see where you go with this. Right now you've set up a bunch of questions but haven't ...

I just sang along to your "Poker Face"/coffee addict parody, so I definitely wanted to come and check this one out too. Good parodies are very difficult to write - ...

This is great! I played "Poker Face" on my iTunes while I was reading through, and most of it fit just perfectly. The only parts I wasn't able to make ...