Areida

Hm....very interesting....I like it, though. It is sort of weird, I suppose, but it's really cool at the same time. I personally think it shows lots of potential. But I ...

It's really good. I especially admire the way you managed to convey a sense of growing hopelessness while trying to put on a happy face for the world while hurting ...

WOW!!! That was really good....sometimes I'll read poems with lots of big words and great structure but I'll have no idea what's going on....your poem conveyed lots of emotion...the typical ...

I'm with...um...well whoever said it. No caps. Uh uh. *shakes head* It's really favourite part was probably the end: passion is nothing love is lust love is dust perhaps even ...

It's actually very good-- I don't have any critiques, but then, I'm no poet, lol.... My favourite part: "a woman with pink flowers carefully places each blossom on the bulletproof ...

I liked it. Thinking of earth's time to be here as a pendulum was a neat illustration. I haven't read an acrostic in a long time and honestly can't remember ...

Sam- it doesn't need any continuation. Some pieces are perfect when they are short and powerful like this one. Whoa....great job. At first I didn't understand what was going on, ...

uh, no it's different, very much so. BUt thank you. I only wish that MORE PEOPLE would crit this. :shock: Haha...I know how you feel. This was very impressive. You ...

It's very good. I like sweet, innocent little pieces like this. :D Two suggestions: (1) Lengthen it a bit with more descriptions, (2) Break it up into more paragraphs so ...

Whoa...excellent. The opening sentence is magnificent- it really caught my attention. The middle is a bit tedious...nothing I can really pinpoint but it was sort of hard to read. Toward ...