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Ooh, I like this. You make it very clear that this is a fantasy story, but do it in a different way. The characters are so much more personable, so ...

Wow, you were only eleven when you wrote this? I liked it a lot, and now I like it even more knowing that you wrote it at that age. It ...

Read this in eighth grade, and I love it. It's definitely one of my favourite books. Have you ever read A Demon's Roadmap To Your Soul ? It's this little ...

Your word choice and images are great, as usual, but I, like most other people here, couldn't seem to find a lot of emotion in it. Not sure if that ...

Oh, Dusky... it makes me want to cry. This is such an amazing way to capture all the feelings you get when the break-up comes, what with letting the voices ...

There's actually a thread for this, if you care to go look for it. I have immense respect for Tolkien, who practically created a whole new subgenre and style of ...

Wow. This is totally not my style, but for whatever reason, I sort of liked it. It was dark and definitely morbid, but you seemed to handle it well. The ...

Ooh, Rei, you hit it right on! Definitely Monty Python. My favourite part: "Fred nodded in agreement, ‘And indeed – how do they survive such a great fall? One would ...

Pretty good. I like it except for one thing: (and do your goddamn math homework, while you're at it) It seemed unecessary with the rest of the poem. I guess ...

Welcome again! :D I agree with emotion_less. The poem didn't really evoke any kind of emotion from me, and was a bit too straightforward. I have a problem with that ...

I'll have to come back and read the rest later, but I got all the way to the first set of stars. Your content is very good, as well as ...

Wow. I don't think I've ever read any of your lyrics before, but dang, girl, that was incredible! I wish I could hear the tune if you've got one in ...

Oh gracious... that was beautiful. I really liked the play on words in the title; it's clever. My favourite line other than that was most definitely "Your skin is so ...

Then you accomplished your goal. :D :wink: Cute, though. Maybe it could be incorporated into a story, like if you had a really eccentric character that was really interesting but ...

The title really caught my attention for some reason or another. It's a great description, but one I never really thought about. I also liked the the thought of stars ...