Areida

Ohhh my gracious... I haven't read The Egypt Game since sixth grade... I love that book. I always used to wish that I had friends who would play games like ...

Wow, Sam, very wow. I'm going to have to be repetitive here and say "what Misty said" for a lot of this. You had several minor spelling/grammar errors (such as ...

I think I'm becoming addicted to your poetry. I suppose I can't really say that after two poems, but you're good. The italics were a great effect, but I agree ...

Hmm. I like it. The first stanza didn't really do anything for me, but the second stanza caught my attention. The rest was great. Warm and sensual, I think you ...

Man, El, this is good! Sometimes these "oh, I seem to have stumbled into another world" stories are far too cliched and almost painful to read, but these characters are ...

Wow... you do know your stuff. The language grates on me a bit, but I do appreciate that you had all the proper warnings and whatnots. I'm not sure why ...

You have a story you could potentially make extremely moving, but you didn't utilize your talent properly. "I hate you mum!" I slammed the door hard, the old and rotten ...

I'm going to have to be redundant here. I thought it was too as well, and the repetition clearly showed what sort of thing you were leading up to. Like ...

Oooh... It gives me shivers... The French is a really nice touch. I can barely pronounce it and don't know what any of it means, but it sounds beautiful. I ...

Good way to let us see his family--sit us down to dinner with them, LOL. I'm glad Niobe mentioned the "burring"/"burying" thing, because I sat there and read the sentence ...

I like the added use of the Dawn Treader; C.S. Lewis is great. Overall, I thought this was good. The ending was a bit abrupt but this bit was engaging ...

Since my school starts close to Labor Day, our second nine weeks doesn't end until two weeks after Christmas. Meaning... you guessed it... my finals are the week after we ...

*laughs* How about I gather all my otter friends and we hold hands (paws?) and get in a circle and sing the Who song from the Grinch. And then we'll ...

*is honoured name got mentioned in the same context as Snoink, Jack, Crysi, Hunter, and good taste* The idea itself seems a bit trite/overdone, but I think as long as ...

I'm too lazy to print it, LOL. But if you break the paragraphs up like this so that there's a space between them, it will make it a whole lot ...