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Hahahaha, Snoink, you are the greatest. As Sam once said to me, your work "is so literally 'shut up'." To repeat Imp, brevity truly is the soul of wit, and ...

This is great, you two! I love Brad's comment that only one of Grif's poems was "adequate." How very Spock-like. ;) And... pirates? Ohh my, sounds like a perfect time ...

Yeah, Addie, geeze, how come you didn't talk about the modern church too? It probably only would have taken you six more slides on your Power Point presentation and an ...

I agree with Imp and Jack; what a lovely little story! I applaud you for writing it so simply. It sounds like something that would appear in a deleted scene ...

Peter knew he should’ve known better than to expect real comfort in a Beaver’s dam. It was cozy, alright, and a welcome respite from the cold. Again, “all right”, not ...

I don't think I've said hi to you before, so let me just start with a quick hello. Hi! Hehe... Okay, now onto the real critique. Overall, I was not ...

I really liked this! I have problems with being succinct sometimes, but with very few words you managed to convey a massive amount of feeling, along with a setting that's ...

Wow, I can't believe I never commented on this one; I've always liked this poem! The title especially has stuck with me. The whole thing is so sad, but so ...

I just have to say this: I live in a portion of Texas that hasn't seen snow since New Year's Eve of 2001. On Saturday, the day before Easter, it ...

I will do the gushing from which Sam and Imp somehow managed to refrain. OMG! I love this style for you, Jack. Most of your prose that I have read ...

Yay! Ari has superhuman strength and extreme bossiness! Thanks, Griffy! :mrgreen: I love the evil dragon too. How gauche of him to just swoop down like that. Operation Monkey Business ...

I usually avoid vampire stories altogether because they usually make me want to hurl, they're so bad. But this is really an excellent book so far. Of course, I'm only ...

From reading the critiques, I like the edits you've made. Overall, pretty creepy, but interesting at the same time. It might be cool to give more specific information about the ...

I love fairy tales, so I enjoyed this piece a lot. You followed the fairy tale format to some extent, but since you didn't use any magical elements, it might ...

The first timeI read Till We Have Faces , I actually disliked it because I didn't get it. The second time I loved it, and even though I didn't really ...