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  • Novel / Chapter » Dramatic, Teen Fiction Re: Claustrophobic Chapter 1

    This is highly impressive. I'm just rereading it now to see if I can find some nitpicks, but you have mostly accurate work. Where you really shine is your description ...

    Jun 12, 2012
  • Poetry » Humor, Culture Re: Monday

    Hi there :) SORRY for the late delay. May I be the first to say how much I can relate to this? Bad day at school, wishing it will eventually ...

    Jun 1, 2012
  • Lyrics » Lyrical, Realistic Re: Aspergers Song

    Umm, I have Aspergers myself. I generally feel these emotions sometimes. I went to the extreme end of the spectrum because people wouldn't really understand. Yes, it isn't reflective of ...

    May 13, 2012
  • Lyrics » Lyrical, Realistic Re: Go To Sleep

    Hee hee. "Controversy". Yeah, I got a bit carried away promoting this, didn't I? ;)

    May 11, 2012
  • Lyrics » Lyrical, Realistic Re: Go To Sleep

    Don't worry, I've contrasting the intro and the main body of the song. AND I really don't pay much attention to what people say TBH, unless it's actually something I ...

    May 11, 2012
  • Lyrics » Lyrical, Realistic Re: Go To Sleep

    I've edited it to match the description of the song. Thanks for your honest comments :)

    May 11, 2012
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Other Re: Deepest Blue

    What you have here is a nice blend of repetition and beauty within your poetry. I've read all your other works but have decided to comment on this one because ...

    May 5, 2012
  • Novel / Chapter » Fanfiction, Fantasy Re: The Heart of a Career Chapter 1

    Hi there :) By request, I am now reviewing your long-awaited novel. I have been requested by your friend and, ultimately, you; I had some high expectations of this. I ...

    Apr 30, 2012
  • Lyrics » Spiritual, Lyrical Re: Won't you please listen?

    Hey Spark! :) I haven't really reviewed for a while, so apologies if this is both short and greatly unhelpful. It's very...hopeful. But that isn't a bad thing. In fact, ...

    Apr 3, 2012
  • Lyrics » Romantic, Satire Re: ...

    Well yeah, you're Satan.

    Apr 2, 2012
  • Lyrics » Romantic, Satire Re: ...

    That was in my intention ;)

    Apr 2, 2012
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Broken heart and a broken kitchen side. (name edited)

    I haven't reviewed in a while, so apologies for the scrapiness. This is a poem, I believe. At least this is what I get from it. Just by looking at ...

    Mar 20, 2012
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Broken heart and a broken kitchen side. (name edited)

    Whoops! Sorry, have to post it- just checking if the reply thing worked

    Mar 20, 2012
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Broken heart and a broken kitchen side. (name edited)

    I haven't reviewed in a while, so apologies for the scrapiness.

    Mar 20, 2012
  • Lyrics » Health, Lyrical Re: Let's Talk About Sex

    :D It's meant to be a cheesy song with a xylophone with over-produced drum noises. Like WRRRRRR.

    Mar 1, 2012


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