Ardor

XD Aww, is it a compliment? :P

Heh. I forgot about this long ago...

Gaaah ignore this, double post :P

Shalom! This is 567ajt here, and I'm here to review this poem of yours. As I have noticed with your other works, such as The Silence and Pain, you like ...

Hello, my good friend! This is 567ajt here to give a quick comment on your work. So, first what I liked. I really liked the tone of your writing, and ...

This shares my name :P (random comment)

Holly! :D This is not necessarily a review, but just to say I really liked this. Short, but sweet. Happy trails!!!

...if it's possible to like this one hundred times, I would do so.

Yes. It was. But I was rushing XD Don't ask why, though >.

XD Thanks for your comment. The metaphor "calm as hindu cows" is a reference to the film Fight Club, which too has a feeling of chaos and anarchy. The dream ...

Oooh! Ok XD I was rushing this review so I probably made a typo

Hi :) I deliberately added no apostrophes and made it hard to read, hence The Unreadable. Good comments, though.

Only you would like this ;)

Thank you for your feedback ;) It's my attempt at a moody, almost REM kind of piece.

Meh. This is ok, but I think you need to improve your use of words. You seem to be over exaggerating the language a bit too much. I get that ...