Ardor

Hey! I wil be your reviewer. First things first: As the storm calms down and leaves, A fear starts to awaken in you.. Once again... all over again. Why give ...

Heeheeheehee. This unleashes the child in me for sure! I

I didn't realise it was about abortion until I opened the spoiler. Now I do. Whoa. Oh man. OH MAN OH MAN OH MAN! This is what happens when you ...

This was personal to say the least. I did find this fairly graphic. I am a guy, so I definetely don't have periods. You have managed to do what few ...

First of all, welcome to YWS. Second of all, great preface! Sure, it may need a bit more detail and a tiny bit longer, but you already seem to be ...

This was good. I liked the images you were trying to come across, and it flowed really nicely as a continuous piece of writing. I also liked how despite you ...

Hmmm.....Interesting concept. I don't know if it will keep it's interest in part 2 though. It seems more like a draft than a story. It just seems....empty. I don't feel ...

Has nice sense of environment, which is VITAL for horror stories. You see they rely so much on atmosphere. You also hav good sense of character, nice feelings of isolation ...

Flawless. Absolutely nothing wrong with these three poems. In fact, they flow together almost in a trilogy. Again, flawless. This is absolutely astonishing. And I knew this was apparent from ...

This was really nice. Admittably, I'm not so much of a fan of stuff about angels, but this was really nice. I liked how you mentioned the deer in one ...

The idea is....interesting. However, I don't think it is very necessary. This narrator I find a bit grumpy and miderable- it kind of spoils the read if this narrator is ...

I have high expectations of a lot of writers.. You are one of those writers. After reading a lot of your work, I always expect an amazing follow up. I ...

I like the idea, but I'm a bit surprised you have dived in already. I think prologues should serve as an introduction, like introducing the current state of time. Already ...

Gee, you forgot to tell me about this poem. It is absolutely astonishing. I can't believe it took me almost two months to read this. I literally stumbled on it ...

I liked this. It had an interesting concept to it that I loved. I seemed to get under the impression that this character was depressed about who they were, whether ...