ArcticMonkey

Oh, I see! Thanks for clearing that up

Ah okay 'insatiable', I'll need to remember what that means, I get some vocab a bit confused xD Glad to help!

Eeep, I tried to edit the bit with the quotes but I found it hard to see what exactly went wrong there. If you're having trouble reading this please PM ...

@carbonCore I totally agree with you there actually, having a dialogue based story would be very interesting- but it is if it's used properly. I guess it's just something I'm ...

Hi! Thanks for such an in depth review, it was really helful :) Yeah, this was the first poem I've written in like two years? I don't know, I'm usually ...

Hey! Thanks for the review, it is really appreciates. Like I said, I really don't write poetry so thanks for the pointers and I'll keep them in mind and maybe ...

Hiya! Thanks so much for the review, I know what you mean by it was slightly confusing, so I'll try and tweak it a bit! Thanks again -Arx

Thanks for your review, it is much appreciated! :D I'm going to try and touch up on those things mentioned, thanks again!

haha this made me laugh- great piece of writing xD

Okay, I will take a look at that. I'm glad I helped :)

Hey Demie! Thanks for your review, it's much appreciated. I know, those cliches were a bit bad. Although, I think I'm gonna keep them in this song, but definitely going ...

Hey! Thanks for reviewing! The whole 'were' and 'where' thing- I'm terrible at spellings and grammar! Anyways, I do have music and melody to this, maybe I'll show you on ...

Hello! Thanks so much for your comments and feedback, I really appreciate it! I'm not too sure of the genre myself, but yeah, thanks for your words! Bye! -Tamara xxx

Thanks so much for your review, much appreciated! I do have music for it actually, it's on electric guitar though, haha, but no distortion. Also, I am terrible with grammar ...