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Hello FearlessLove! What I liked about these lyrics was that there was a narrative feel going on, like I felt I was reading a story. And although it was a ...

Hiya GreenLight, here as requested :). This was really interesting to read, I don't believe I've read anything else of yours, but I can see a different sort of writing ...

Hi again, annardj! What I liked about this was that we saw what Adira's theatre thing is like, because it was mentioned in the previous chapter, so it's good to ...

AAAAH DEANIE! This chapter was too much, but not in a bad way, in such a good way. You don't understand the emotions I was feeling when I read this. ...

Yo. Another great chapter, I like how we're learning more about her friends. I also particularly liked the bit where Ms. McKenzie was babbling on about A-Levels, and then it ...

Hiiiiiiiii! I liked that this chapter was had quite a bit bit with Tamara and Leslie. I also like the fact that Tamara has someone that she can open up ...

Hiya Deanie, because you're so fabulous and all, I just really wanted to review one of your stories, so I'm starting from the beginning. What I liked about this was ...

Hi Ossum! So firstly... OMG YOU MET YIRUMA. That's fantastic, I've only heard a River Flows in You by him so I thought I'd listen to Kiss the Rain and ...

Hiya bluegiraffe! What I liked about this piece was that we learnt quite a bit about your MC, as in her physical appearance and just a bit about her. She ...

Hey, wisegirl! Here to review~ I really love the song Titanium, and what I liked about this piece was I could see where you inspiration came from. It's pretty short, ...

Me again! Right, so I liked how we found out more about Corra, and her family, not just through a long backstory. I like the relationship you've shown between her ...

Hello! So I saw chapter 2 of this is the Green Room, so I thought I'd review this before reading that one. What I liked about this is you're showing ...

Hi mixofs, and welcome to YWS! Here to review your story~ So I think the ending of the piece really brings it up loads.... not that it's the happiest ending ...

Hiya R0nnie! Here to review as requested. I actually really liked this poem, and after listening to the audio of it I liked it even more. I'm the furthest thing ...

Hiya FearlessLove4, and welcome to YWS! So what I liked about this song is firstly, I think the repetition you used was effective and worked really well. The structure of ...