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Re: Promise
Hello FearlessLove! What I liked about these lyrics was that there was a narrative feel going on, like I felt I was reading a story. And although it was a ...
Aug 5, 2014 -
Re: Dodger Chapter 1: Reflection
Hiya GreenLight, here as requested :). This was really interesting to read, I don't believe I've read anything else of yours, but I can see a different sort of writing ...
Aug 5, 2014 -
Re: Instant: 2
Hi again, annardj! What I liked about this was that we saw what Adira's theatre thing is like, because it was mentioned in the previous chapter, so it's good to ...
Aug 3, 2014 -
Re: Broken Pencils are Pointless 2.2
AAAAH DEANIE! This chapter was too much, but not in a bad way, in such a good way. You don't understand the emotions I was feeling when I read this. ...
Aug 3, 2014 -
Re: Broken Pencils are Pointless 2.1
Yo. Another great chapter, I like how we're learning more about her friends. I also particularly liked the bit where Ms. McKenzie was babbling on about A-Levels, and then it ...
Aug 3, 2014 -
Re: Broken Pencils are Pointless 1.2
Hiiiiiiiii! I liked that this chapter was had quite a bit bit with Tamara and Leslie. I also like the fact that Tamara has someone that she can open up ...
Aug 3, 2014 -
Re: Broken Pencils are Pointless 1.1
Hiya Deanie, because you're so fabulous and all, I just really wanted to review one of your stories, so I'm starting from the beginning. What I liked about this was ...
Aug 3, 2014 -
Re: Kiss the Rain
Hi Ossum! So firstly... OMG YOU MET YIRUMA. That's fantastic, I've only heard a River Flows in You by him so I thought I'd listen to Kiss the Rain and ...
Aug 3, 2014 -
Re: Chapter 1: Newcomer
Hiya bluegiraffe! What I liked about this piece was that we learnt quite a bit about your MC, as in her physical appearance and just a bit about her. She ...
Aug 2, 2014 -
Re: Titanium
Hey, wisegirl! Here to review~ I really love the song Titanium, and what I liked about this piece was I could see where you inspiration came from. It's pretty short, ...
Aug 2, 2014 -
Re: Bruises (Chapter 2 Subsiding)
Me again! Right, so I liked how we found out more about Corra, and her family, not just through a long backstory. I like the relationship you've shown between her ...
Aug 2, 2014 -
Re: Bruises ( Chapter 1: Save Me )
Hello! So I saw chapter 2 of this is the Green Room, so I thought I'd review this before reading that one. What I liked about this is you're showing ...
Aug 2, 2014 -
Re: Drive All Night
Hi mixofs, and welcome to YWS! Here to review your story~ So I think the ending of the piece really brings it up loads.... not that it's the happiest ending ...
Aug 2, 2014 -
Re: .
Hiya R0nnie! Here to review as requested. I actually really liked this poem, and after listening to the audio of it I liked it even more. I'm the furthest thing ...
Aug 1, 2014 -
Re: Relief
Hiya FearlessLove4, and welcome to YWS! So what I liked about this song is firstly, I think the repetition you used was effective and worked really well. The structure of ...
Aug 1, 2014
