ArcticMonkey

Hey DUDEK 1794! Welcome to YWS! Ok, firstly, why is this in Historical Fiction? Is there something in the next chapters that makes it Historical Fiction? Anyway, let me start ...

Hey Yirikko! I think that this poem was really good. i admit, at first I imagined a poem about the painting starry starry night by Vincent Van Gogh... Ever heard ...

Heya Fizza, I like it! Strong Points The way it is set out is interesting, and original. Weak Points Like Elinor said, it's just a bit vague and it has ...

Hello! The poem is a bit confusing to me, but don't worry, I still like it! The rythm kind of turns on and off, but most of my poems are ...

Hello, I really liked the idea of this poem, and I think it's quite unique and original! Well Done! There are just a few mistakes in your syllables which are: ...

I was singing along witha a karaoke version ( in my head of cousrse). Great stuff, i really enjoyed it! (Thumbs up) ~Tamara

Wow, this was really cool. I love Alice in Wonderland so much, your poem of it is really good. I think to improve you need to work on getting a ...

Hello, This is quite cool, I mean it's superb! I would like to say that you need to add in more poetic language. Don't worry, most poems have a very ...

Hello, First off, I like your introduction. You set the scene very well, using very nice words. I like the dialogue, but I think sometimes you had too much of ...

Hey iCarlyfan! This is really good. I'm first going to start off with the first bit ok? First of all, I like your introduction. It's not boring, but doesn't give ...

Ok, sorry, but you need to change your grammer. Let me just show you how this should be set out: As Sakura ran through the trees, another wave of pain ...

Hello, First of all, I would like to say that this is an excellent poem, seeing as it's your first! Anyway, I wish that the sun was here again, This ...

Hello, Ok, first of all, I would like to say well done for writing this piece. I think it's great! Now, in terms of poetic language, I like: The real ...

I'm not really writing a review here it's just that I think that you should rate this 12 because it contains strong language. I really love your ending, I REALLY ...

Hello, I too, think writers block is my biggest concern. Although, I don't get it alot... Probably the best thing to do is not write until the block has ended, ...