ArcticMonkey

Hiya skorlir! Sorry for the delay, but here to review as requested :D As a side note, I'm not very good at reviewing poetry, but I'll try my best to ...

Hiya champ321! Here to review as requested, so sorry for the delay... Nitpicks in the spoiler: The sunset reminded Junior of the one he saw had seen just thirty-six hours ...

Hiya! I am deeply sorry for the lateness, but here to review as requested :D Nitpicks in the spoiler: Today I got an important message from my grandmother. It said ...

Hi rachaelwillson1. Firstly, welcome to YWS! Anyways, here to review as requested! :D Nitpicks in the spoiler: Her hair whisked around my face, caressing my high cheekbones and prominent chin, ...

Hiya therealme! :D here to review as requested ;) Nitpicks in the spoiler: Last night I went over to Lesley%u2019s house for a sleepover. We got some weed earlier that ...

Hey Unconsoled! Sorry for the slight delay, but here to review as requested :D May i just say beforehand that I'm not very good with Non-Fiction reviews, but I'll try ...

Hiya *coco! Sorry for the slight delay but here to review as requested :D Nitpicks in the spoiler: Rows of white tents were dotted around the vast dry fields, shining ...

Hiya ka67! Here to review :D So firstly, nitpicks in the spoiler: Aria kept her head down as she drifted through her school corridors and let her thick and waist ...

Hi Ems! Here to review as requested! So firstly, nitpicks in the spoiler: The warmth of the sweet coffee house was a welcome change from outside, where a thick blanket ...

Hey again Auxi! Here for chapter two! Okay, so to start, a quick nitpick: was so excited. Her laptop was ready and everyone ha d connected to the Techno-cam, Now, ...

Hi Auxii! Here to review as requested! :D So firstly, nitpicks in the spoiler (there weren't many): Watch you r backs, and if you don't want a fight, stay out ...

Hi helovedme13! Firstly, welcome to YWS! Anyways, onto the review. Nitpicks in the spoiler, my comments are in bold: You’re riding on endless trails and endless fields. Seeing nothing but ...

Hi there! I’m Arc and I’m here to review :D Okay, so firstly, nit-picks in the spoiler: I could can hear the clip-clopping of her high heels on the tiles ...

Hello, DarkPandemonium, So I must say I really enjoyed this song because I've thought these thoughts so much but never really knew how to word them. I think that it's ...

Hey Skye! Here to review! So my initial thoughts when I first read this was that I actually really enjoyed it and thought they might sound quite good in a ...