ArcticMonkey

Hiya marwa! This was a very interesting read and I think you've included some good key points in here. I also really like the topic of this essay type thing, ...

Hiya Legible! Here to review your story~ I saw the little info things about this, and it looked really intriguing to me. I think when you write things in the ...

Heya Deanie! I've returned to review the next part of this story~ Right, so this got exciting! I think the ending really brought up the pace and it was really ...

Hi again 221B! Considering the prologue was really interesting, I'd noticed you posted this up so thought I'd take a look at it too. I really like this chapter, as ...

Hi dark! Here to review your lyrics :) So I'm currently writing this on my phone so I apologise in advance for any typing errors. You posted this quite a ...

Hey, harshita! Here to review your story :) I thought this was really beautiful. I can see the emotion coming through with it all, yet it didn't overtake the whole ...

Hey Evangeline :P. Here to review your story! I saw this in the Green Room so I thought I'd take a look at this piece and I can definitely say ...

Hiya 221B! Firstly, welcome to YWS :D Now onto your story. I thought this was very cool and a really good read. Although it didn't really seem much like a ...

Hey, riot! Firstly, welcome to YWS :D I'll be reviewing your story today. I think the title of this story is really cool, and the kind of thing that draws ...

Hi Ben! Here to review as requested :) Okay, so what I'm really loving right now is the plot, and although nothing has actually happened in this chapter I think ...

Hey, runaway! Here to review your poem- I really enjoyed reading this poem because even though it didn't have the happy ending I was expecting, it was still really sweet. ...

Hey, Ari! Here to review this as promised :) Now, this is obviously a really tough subject to talk about, let alone write about and you've done it so well ...

Hiya Dani, here to review your story! So, I was actually really drawn to the title of this piece, it seemed really intriguing so I thought I'd read it. Also, ...

Hey Skins! Here to review :D Okay, hmmm, what should I start off with? As usual, the style you write this in is really good and whatnot with varying your ...

Hi Kevikur! Here to review your story~ Firstly, wow. This completely sickened me and left me with a horrible feeling- great job! ;D. I mean me feeling sick is nothing ...